This is an unedited and very rough draft. Comments are welcome. :)
As
I walked up to the training headquarters, I felt small and inadequate. I
couldn’t believe I was here finally. The tall, indistinct gray building loomed
over me, making me question my choice of being here. I felt the same familiar
prickle on the back of my neck. I paused and glanced around looking for the
source. I haven’t learned to trust my instincts at all times, but this time it
was stronger than ever. Someone or something here had an extremely malicious
mind set. I just pushed the feeling aside, figuring they probably had prisoners
held somewhere near. I gathered myself, held my head high and marched myself
through the revolving glass doors. Once inside, I took a deep breath and headed
towards the receptions desk. A young man, late 20s sat at the desk, looking
like someone had kicked his dog. I approached him with my best smile and said,
“Hi! I’m a new recruit and I’m looking for the orientation room.” He huffed,
rolled his eyes, then raised his gaze to meet mine. I was instantly paralyzed
by his copper colored stare. My body hummed with alertness. He eyed me head to
toe, he was grinned, a cocky quirk of his lips and said,” You sure you’re in
the right place, squirt? I do believe we have a height requirement.” I bristled
at the name. I’ve always been short. Just under five feet, it’s my one sore
spot. I steeled myself, and returned his icy glaze, “Yes, I am in the right
place. My name’s Sam McCoy. I should be listed as a new recruit.” He squinted
back at me, and turned to the computer. I watch as he types with a determined
look on his face. He pauses, eyes racing over the screen. He stops looking
puzzled, glances at me and then back at the screen. He turns and looks me in
the eye, “Can I see some identification, please?” I roll my eyes and pull out
my wallet. I hand over my ID and wait. He glances at my ID, to me, to the
screen, “Samantha McCoy? We only have a Sam McCoy in the system.” Trying my
damnedest to not scuff at him, “My full name is Samantha McCoy, I go by Sam.
Just check the birthdate. I’ll even give you my social if you don’t believe
me.” He looks over the at the computer screen, his eyes widen, and says,
“birthdate, please?” “January 10, 1987.”
“Huh, okay. Welcome
to Quantico, Ms. McCoy, “ he replies. ”Sorry about the misunderstanding,”